Monday, May 9, 2011

My Sonnet

Only this morning I saw it was gone
The thief had no mind what they had taken
But now it seemed to me that they had won
Maybe some day they too would awaken
To see the happiness that was stolen
The reason for thievery hold anon
In my watered eyes the tears sat swollen
A culprit unaware of what was done
A foolish decision was made by him
He held no regard for the world around
A decision assembled on a whim
A long buried life, far below the ground
The lesson learned a bit too late for some
But time in learning, the justice shall come

Sunday, May 1, 2011

The Golf Links

The golf links lie so near the mill
       That almost every day
 The laboring children can look out
       And see the men at play.
First of all I wanted to find out what 
golf links were and when this poem may 
have been written because it seems to be 
about a very touchy subject. Maybe about 
the sociological views of a certain time. 
I was thinking the 20's and 30's, but I 
wasn't sure when golf really became a 
big thing for men to play and in the 20's
I don't think there were really that many 
men out playing golf unless they were 
extremely wealthy and the mills would 
have probably been empty since it seemed 
in the 20's that no jobs were available. 
I wasn't too sure about the time when the 
child labor movement really came about, 
but I didn't think it went as late as the 
30's and I know it never got past the 40's. 
When I finally found a date it said it was 
written in 1915 which surprised me a bit, 
but in those times child labor was a very 
important movement at that time. Golf 
links are courses built on sandy ground 
perhaps near a shore. It's almost like 
these rich men are out having a day at 
the beach while mere children labor 
away in a mill. I feel like it's the 
owners of the mill that the children are 
watching. Maybe it represents the moral 
repugnance of the time. These men see no 
problem with the fact that children are 
working in dangerous situations and they 
even go so far as to shove the children's 
faces in it by playing out near the mill. 
I thought this poem did a very good job of 
getting straight to the authors point about 
how wrong child labor is. It is very 
interesting because normally it is laboring 
men and children at play but now the roles 
have been reversed and I think that the 
author makes that a shocking reality for 
the reader. When the author says they 
" can look out/And see the men at play" 
it was almost as if they were privileged 
enough to even get to look at the men playing. 
Overall I thought it was a very powerful and 
interesting poem. The author had a very 
obvious standpoint and she makes it very 
clear and personal about how child labor 
made her feel.